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your scene and storyline was readable but you had a guy in a car who did not look like he was actually sitting in the car and your actions were not realistic, try to act out your scene in real life to get better actions
- Good idea, turns the context into something different.
- Animation looks drunk.
- Expressions are kind of lacking.
- There's a bit of a lag of lipsyncing to the audio.
Animator: Dario M. Ossa A.
Description: Two guys were traveling in difficult terrains, one of them was guiding the other. Tires were punctured, so the one guiding offers himself to help, but the place is oppresive outside and the car very heavy...
Experience: 4 months as student
Time taken: 3 weeks