Comments:
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Eric Raffle:
your motion was not realistic enough in some parts it was too fast and you needed to act out the scene before animating
Latif Moxon:
Concatrate on timing
Harry G:
the set up and the idea is good. The animation needs a lot of improvement.
Animator: binoKV
Description: a test animation of travelling
Experience: one month experience
Time taken: 4 days