Shekhar N Skr:

Nice concept!

Eric Raffle:

you need more realism to your speech it lost you a lot of points you need to research on YouTube for lip-sync tutorials, because I can see you can animate but you need to know where to add jaw drops and also you need to act out your scene in real life because your timing was a bit off on your movement

Dang Duy Quang:

Your animation is good but your timing is even.