David Budgen:

Lip Syncing is very unconvincing.

Shaun Bartoo:

Your camera move at the start is unnecessary. It feels like you just didn't want to animate the first several seconds of dialogue. Really lacking animation fundamentals here. Needs a lot of work.

Fernando Incetta:

Facial animation is very basic. Also, try to shift the weight a little bit. Standing that still, with the torso straight, is very unnatural and unappealing.

Imon Branch:

too soon to start the scene