John:

I like the finger twitch.

OceanicBoy Joey:

is the sound speed up already? feels like it..

Sharkhead:

Too much unecessary movements, and timing needs to improve more

Joel Murphy:

this actually made me laugh when I saw it (which when judging this competition, can be tough to do since you're seeing so many entries)

Could have been even funnier if you expanded this concept a bit further: If you added some acting from her, like if she's pretending to be unconscious to get his attention (like he'll kiss her to wake her up or something), and he's oblivious to the fact that she's aware. Then he get's worked up in his story and punches her but doesn't realize it till he's done talking (like his gestures were so big it was an accident)

Dominic Rayner:

Marked you down for the violence.

Heindrick Nelson:

why did you accelered the sound... ?

Imon Branch:

that was funny