Coffee N Milk:

U should add some body movement for the character, not only lipsyn

John:

Is this what we see when we die?

Otávio Neres:

Try to.. uh... animate? You could at least blink his eye now and then. Your lipsync is good, though.

Laura Frost:

This is good, but the character would be more expressive if you moved its eyebrow as well.

laura:

The zoom out. Everything is in the zoom out! ^^

Imon Branch:

why this scene it lacks the boy movement and there is no background