Comments:
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John:
Hard to see any of the mouth movements.
Sabrina Winkel:
I love this one! Great story!
Rachel Col:
I love the camera flip!
Fernando Incetta:
I loved the first shot, it's a good example of visual comedy. But then it gets a little clunky.
Kevin:
Concept is fantastic, animation needs a lot of work
Jim P:
so true haha, no one eats road kill!
John Leland:
nice story here, starts at an interesting point to draw you in right away. that was a good choice. id make the rabbit impact the ground more on the fall, this is a really good animation
Francisco J Ramirez:
staging is lacking, didnt know who was talking at first.
Joel Murphy:
This was shaping up to be great! you had so much potential! and some nice animation too!
I felt like this was about to do something original, then didn't follow through.
I liked the set up: the rabbit hanging upside-down. then you had a nice cut to the captors...
But then when it turned into a hypothetical situation with the rabbit falling in mid air... you lost me!
Feels like you might have run out of time. The first half is solid though. Could make for a great demo piece. I would encourage you to go back and finish what you set up.
Meridith Winterfeld:
He's floating...
Imon Branch:
not enough details
Animator: Andy
Description: Rabbit stew is on the menu...
This was my first time actually rendering out a scene and added a background. I wanted to do something a little nicer than a playblast for this competition
Experience: 2 years
Time taken: Couples weeks on and off