Fernando Incetta:

With a character that is 80% face, you should take special care with facial animations. Here, you have the same face all the time. I know it must be a rig limitation but it really hurts your piece.

Shaun Bartoo:

The flips in the spider's body are too fast

Francisco J Ramirez:

i like that walk ..

Dominic Rayner:

I like this because you still feel he is talking when he walks around, and you can get away without perfect lipsynch with this text anyway. It is one of the few here that has original animation to the dialogue, even the other well animated entrants tend to use annoying mechanical cliché gestures which do not inspire.. Although the facial animation is limited, and it's too dark to see parts, well done.

Amin Bahari:

pretty bold to pick a character with as many legs to animate.

Imon Branch:

that was good