Erich:

Drop the shoulders and film yourself for reference so you can use that as timing!

Fernando Incetta:

There's not much happening here. Work more on your poses.

Kait M.:

The arms a bit stiff, you don't have to be super exaggerated, but a bit more acting in the arms.

Michael McKnight:

Lip syncing is good, but the body is way too stiff looking! Looks like he's being held up by sticks.

Imon Branch:

the entire body movement need a little work.