Comments:
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william johnson:
you need to have something going on your camera was zoomed out and on motion was happening and the turn is to stiff you need to have something happening next time
Charlotte Higton:
Maybe work on your staging and framing of the characters. Shot at the start doesnt seem to be working but very nice idea and well done.
Imon Branch:
the intro is off, and the body movement needs work.
Animator: John
Description: Looking back at what should have been done.
Experience: 2 months
Time taken: 4 days