Comments:
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Erich:
The spine doesn't move much so it makes him look stiff.
A lot of the arm movements also seem very distracting and float. Using reference can help! :)
Fernando Incetta:
It looks pretty vague. Try to add some weight and presence to your poses.
Imon Branch:
I respect this scene and the topic you had picked.
Animator: Tyler L Herring
Description: Guy on a train dispensing advice on how to survive the perils of the big city.
Experience: 25
Time taken: 8 hours