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Otávio Neres:
Maybe pay more attention to the characters shape? line of action? And don't make him dance when it is not a song, he is moving too much. And try to frame your character better, we do want to see his lips move and not hide from the camera, staging is golden!
OceanicBoy Joey:
timing can speed up for actions transitions. it's not bad tho
Foster Eber:
Try to have the character hit a pose and then stay in it, it feels a little swimmy. Do that and it will look great!
Kait M.:
Hold some of the poses a bit longer, the animation comes off as swim-my.
Fernando Incetta:
You don't need to make him move all the time. It looks random and uninteresting. Try to hold some poses and accent others
Imon Branch:
too much leg movement. but its good
Animator: Kayla Chauveau
Description: at someone's funeral his friend says some last words to the poor soul
Experience: 1 year
Time taken: 3 weeks