Comments:
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Pamela Rivera:
the acts are really slow, and I feel kind of a robotic feeling on the guy that is suppose to be alive. Specially in the interpolation of the poses... needs more work on the timing and the breakdowns.
Phuc Truong:
Eyes are at the default position. move the eyelids more closer to the pupils for more realism.
Holden Van Houten:
All of the characters have basically the same bored expression. Spruce em up a bit, add some character.
Maribel Orozco:
Stiff, but its a nice start
Richard Adams:
Extremely floaty. Idea is good, good rendering, body language decent. Faces need a lot more emotional expressiveness and fix the floatiness (you let the computer do too much of the in-betweening).
Michael Smith:
more exateration.
Kyle Newton:
Those eyes and brows are oddly stiff during conversation.
Ben Hall:
movements could be smoother and poses can be much stronger
Animator: Vincere Amlan
Description: A policeman is having a conversation with another man who is taking two persons, without realizing who they were. After realizing the truth he tells the policeman that he is delivering them to prison.
Experience: Student
Time taken: 2 weeks