Christopher Winn:

Really good choice of story. I love the inclusion of the kid in the "mask" lol. The lipsync could use some clean up, but overall it's good. One of the best for sure.

Javid Fathi:

Good job progressing the dialogue, but your father character moves the toys out of sync with the rest of the action (not moving in arcs), which may distract the audience from the great job you've done with the facial animation. Try simplifying the arm sways to quick, clear and non-repetitive.

Michael Smith:

liked the concern on the dad?

Kyle Newton:

I see you didn't want to animate the kids face. Interesting work-around.

Ben Hall:

The poses here and the situation are hilarious but the motion is just a little jerky