Imani Jay:

I like how the audience is inside the security camera lens in this shot - but I would say if you're going to distort the main character ; then be aware of your background characters too because they look normally proportionate in comparision

Kyle Newton:

I'm guessing you were trying to go for a security camera viewpoint, but I don't think the warped lens is helping. It's more of a crutch to make the actions look more interesting, but the focus should really be on making really good acting where he has varied key poses.

Ben Hall:

Need 12 principles of animation here

Aaron McGriff:

Camera is confusing and distracting.