Michaela Dawn:

Facial expressions are good. Needs more body movement. Don't worry so much about the camera. It takes away from the character's animations.

Richard Adams:

Too much camera movement. It is distracting.

Brian W.:

Impressive camera work. Good expressions.

Michael Smith:

liked the position of the camera

Kyle Newton:

Those closeups werent terrible per se, but they felt so close that they should be leading up to something happening at the end with a zoom out on the whole scene.

Ben Hall:

feels like the camera is moving instead of the characters