Guy Rathbone:

His response at around 100 was nice, a good pose but i think you could of pushed it more and also he's just standing there with a blank expression for most of the time. Maybe think about how he sounds i.e. theres a shake to his voice and he says his lines all broken up so he's uncertain

Kyle Newton:

This would be way improved if there were actual alien characters involved. That sign is one enormous tease.

Ben Hall:

Not enough motion to keep the character alive needs stronger poses and expressions