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Pamela Rivera:
work more on the animation curves, it feels too linear.
Michaela Dawn:
Don't move the camera so much. It takes away from the animation. Just have it jumpcut from still shot to still shot.
David BESNIER:
The camera is moving too much
Javid Fathi:
Good work with your character animation, I like the idea of two robots sharing the conflict. Because your characters don't have mouths), make sure that you make the secondary and body action that much clearer [head nods and antenna movement might show the character's focus/thoughts rather than their word phrasing]. Marvin the Martian is a perfect example of this, if you need one. Good work overall. :)
Ben Hall:
Need 12 principles of animation here
Animator: Alexis Vazquez
Description: the kind of prisoners in this video are not what they are supposed to...
Experience: half a year
Time taken: two weeks