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Zach Savaglio:
The movements are pretty stiff. I would find a tutorial on YouTube and see if you can find better ways to express emotion.
Oliver:
Block out your animation in stepped curves. Start by concentrating on strong poses and timing. Manually key in the in-betweens. Don't let the computer control the rig too much. Think about your camera angle.
Omar:
who are you ?
Animator: Minerva
Description: A lonely conversation between a person and his mind
Experience: 1 year
Time taken: 4 days