Oliver:

Something wrong with upload. Unable to see anything.

Zach Savaglio:

Animation looks like it might be decent, but wrong pixel size.

Richard Adams:

So floaty. It'll help a lot if you study the 12 Principles of Animation. Noticeable glitch in the audio, too at roughly fame 220.

Shreyas Dutta:

Video has trouble ,

Tom Islava:

I'm sorry man but you need to think about your ratio before uploading

Lisa:

Picture didn't appear, only a straight line - not sure if it's a prob with my laptop or caused by the animation

Peter Adrian:

Entire video is squashed