Comments:
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Zach Savaglio:
Extremely choppy movements. That's the first thing I'd work on.
Derek Christmann:
nice blocking!
Jordan Smith:
Still in key poses.
Jessica Cain:
I can see this is just unfinished, so it's hard to critique. Using Deadpool for such an expressive role might not work that great unless you REALLY push those emotions. Your camera framing is weird too.
Animator:
Description: Worked out acting choices, shot reference and posed with cameras.
Experience: A few years
Time taken: A couple hours