Richard Adams:

Good lip syncing, especially the tongue on the second rig. Body mechanics rather floaty. Dislike the gun to the head. Too much implied violence for me. Does heighten the dramatic tension though.

And one of the few times camera movement actually works well and adds to the scene rather than detracts.

Tom Islava:

Not bad, have the gangster move up and down when he walks instead of just staying level.

Gaethan Bracke:

I like the camera work but feel like the transition around frame 47-63 should maybe take less long. Also can be a bit more expressive overall (for example: near the end his expression doesn't change even when the gun is pushed against his forehead. He only follows it with his eyes. You'd expect him to show more emotion.)