Bo Ming Xu:

Nice office area. Make sure to have a lot of breakdowns in your animations. Auto-splining everything can make your animation very floaty. A crucial part of framing is when Ray in the black shirt raises out of his chair. Not being able to see the face for that many frames is a red flag. It would also be nice if the camera was more zoomed in to him so we can see his acing for clear, like an over-the-soulder shot of orange Ray. Nice poses and modeling! I like the "sass" orange Ray gives off