Jeff Kamdon:

I think the acting choices are good on the whole, but the execution of the animation is too snappy. It lacks easing in and out, even if some movements are meant to be fast like at the head turn on frame 92 and "you must" at frame 130. The staging/shot choice is flat, though I understand if the animation would be harder to show. It would be a good idea to work out the key poses at the same time as the cinematography. I like the setting.

Eddie Higgenbottom:

nice end frame love it!

John Fraire:

I like the workspace on the other monitor, nice touch

Celia:

Be careful with eye glossines.

Navischwaren Prakash:

the voice does not sync with the lips, I suggest you import the audio into maya and sync your keyframes with the audio.