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Mike M.:
You focused on the movement of the primary character, but you ignored the secondary character. Very few people sits in a booth/table in a diner with their hands on their lap. Have him hold something - maybe hiding behind a menu - peeking over it when he gives his lines or have him fidgeting or tap the table - make him act like he's hiding something (nervous). Visit a diner and see how people act. Subtly is the key to a good performance.
Animator: Shen Yuxiao
Description: two men sit in the restaurant and talk.
Experience: still a student in third year of university
Time taken: one month