Jamie F:

Some really nice acting choices here, that breathe-in is great. Could use a polish.

Carl Slate:

Very cool. I don't like the position of the hand on his side throughout, it feels unnatural, like it needs some unconscious movement. Good choices with the facial expressions.

Mike M.:

I like the restraint you had in the animation. I would have ended the clip with the primary character opening his hand at the apex of "(frustratingly) ...you!"

Michael Daemmig:

Great work!