Mike M.:

It looks like you are depending on the computer for the animation, at points, your characters are moving in slow motion. Your work could benefit with a reference video - video yourself from the point of view of the viewers and animate as such.

Rémi Elart:

Good! the walk is a bit weird. we can't see much up and down and it doesn't give personnality to your charcter. Think about timing. it could be polished but this scene is a good choice