Jeff Kamdon:

It would have been clearer to understand with proper lip syncing, but if it's not there, then it's not bad (it's not something I can critique properly).

The story presented on screen doesn't seem to match the story of the voice clip. I like the acting for the sitting man. The action of putting up the big hammock is rushed, both in the timing and in the execution of the animation. However, the animation before that isn't bad (the timing of the poses for the man setting up the hammock are too equally spaced which makes the movement feels rigid). Overall, this animation is ambitious, which I like, but it's unfinished, so that must balance things out lol.