Final Rating: 3.89. Finished 114 out of 228 entries.

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Animator: LSY

Description: This is my semester assignment.Please give me some guidance,Thank you very much!I will listen carefully~~

Experience: one year

Time taken: Two weeks


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Jed B.:

Shoot some reference and use that as inspiration for how your characters act and move.

Dave Roddick:

The actions don't seem to fit what they are saying.

Aaron Clement:

Too many poses and a bit twiny. I like the idea.

Victor Fina 2:

Body animation doesn't convey the dialogue

Hannah Cao:

I think you have some nice key poses, but the characters move waay too much to be believable! Consider the weight of the arms as they're swinging around and how that shows in the animation with anticipation, follow through, etc.