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April Competiton

by Chris

Final Rating: 3.15. Finished 182 out of 195 entries.

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Animator: Chris

Description: Decided to give animation a try and used the competition as a starting point for inpsiration

Experience: starting

Time taken: three weeks

Comments:

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Antoine Desnoyers:

floaty

Garrett Evans:

everything is very floaty in your animation. working on in-betweens would benefit you a lot.

Simon Côté:

It needs more fluidity in the movements ;)

eddyiv:

The movements are kind of static at times, put inbetween frames to make them feel more lively.

Foxy:

I'd recommend practicing some of your animation fundamentals before jumping into something as complex as a two-person dialogue!

Zachary Lussier:

I think you have to improve your animation in general in mouvement and facials.

Éloise Valiquette:

You should work on the fluidity of your animation, it is still way too stiff. they move like robots.

Anthony Abou Rezk:

I like this one, it looks nice, try to work on your lip-sync and facial expressions, and maybe go back over a few animation principles to make it better. Anyway , good job!