Comments:
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Antoine Desnoyers:
floaty
Garrett Evans:
everything is very floaty in your animation. working on in-betweens would benefit you a lot.
Simon Côté:
It needs more fluidity in the movements ;)
eddyiv:
The movements are kind of static at times, put inbetween frames to make them feel more lively.
Foxy:
I'd recommend practicing some of your animation fundamentals before jumping into something as complex as a two-person dialogue!
Zachary Lussier:
I think you have to improve your animation in general in mouvement and facials.
Éloise Valiquette:
You should work on the fluidity of your animation, it is still way too stiff. they move like robots.
Anthony Abou Rezk:
I like this one, it looks nice, try to work on your lip-sync and facial expressions, and maybe go back over a few animation principles to make it better. Anyway , good job!
Animator: Chris
Description: Decided to give animation a try and used the competition as a starting point for inpsiration
Experience: starting
Time taken: three weeks