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Spy Talk, Glendon Mooney

by Glendon Mooney

Final Rating: 4.80. Finished 76 out of 195 entries.

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Animator: Glendon Mooney

Description: An undercover spy being annoyed by a pushy Bonnie.
Dude by ahmed shalaby,
Bonnie Legacy by Josh Sobel,

Experience: 1 year

Time taken: Just under 1 week but spread throughout the month


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I can tell where you were going with this, and I think it's pretty decent. The excessive blinking is a bit distracting, however, and eyes should usually be clearly focused at something and then dart to another spot, they wouldn't normally be "swimming" around everywhere. I'd suggest making the expressions more clear, and the movements between to be more intentional and using natural arcs.

Zachary Lussier:

Overall good, i think the girl is good, but the spy i think it will be good to ajust your elbow and check to make him less jerky for the animation overall. Good work how ever!

Levy Van Malder:

your window stops before she grabs it, also his hand is moving in space afterward, but well done classmate ... L


The hand/arm movement seems kinda robotic near he end, but otherwise good job!

Éloise Valiquette:

I think your animation has a little timing problem, the characters go way too fast in their actions, it almost gets confusing. But your animation is a really good start.


The characters feel very poppy and IK to me. They sorta jerk around kinda fast and then sometimes freeze on screen. I'd take a look at smoothing out some of your curves in the graph editor.

Simon Côté:

there are lots of lags but great staging ;)

Anthony Abou Rezk:

Good job! Try and make the lip-sync a little more clear next time and the transition between poses a little smoother, but other than that, it's not bad!