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Antoine Desnoyers:
XD
Brittany H. Simpson:
Nice job on the background. The person's movements seem really slow and linear, adding in eye blinks and breathing might help.
Emmelyn:
Interesting concept, would love to see more body movement to help the characters feel alive. I love the poses, though! I thought it was funny when the dog stared, and then turned around saying "Good luck with that." Good timing with that.
Zachary Lussier:
The aniamtion feel very incomplete on every points, so i think you have to improve in your overall animation. Continue to improve one day you will get it ;-)
Foxy:
This is very confusing to me. I'd work on your clarity of storytelling.
eddyiv:
The dog character's loewer body doesnt seem to actually move, even tho we don't see it, doing it would make it feel more realistic.
Simon Côté:
good lipsync :)
Éloise Valiquette:
I think you still have some work to do on the timing of your animation, it's a bit too slow for the woman's movements. For the dog it would be good to review your animation with a reference of a dog walking on its hind legs, it looks like it is sliding. The woman's lipsync looks good to me.
Anthony Abou Rezk:
Good start! It seems like you were in a blocking stage for some parts of the animation, am I wrong? There is some good stuff to it, I like how you reversed the roles, that's creative!
Animator: Ray Buyers
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Experience: 8 months
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