Comments:
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eddyiv:
Nice movements, felt kinda jagged at times tho
Foxy:
This audio clip was a tough one. To have the voice of a child but not have many child rigs available is rough. However, it does seem incredibly odd hearing a character that looks like an adult sound like a child, so I'd recommend modifying the character a bit to make her look younger.
Outside of that, make sure to practice your body mechanics if you want to include those in a dialogue piece. Her run towards him and his jump up to the bar feel very weightless to me.
Simon Côté:
somtime the movements are too slow and sometime they are too fast but great staging :)
Zachary Lussier:
Good job ! I think the facials can be better however ;-)
Éloise Valiquette:
I think that to improve your animation, you can work a little more on the notion of weight when the character is gripping the bar and also correct the man's walk a little, it looks like he is walking on tiptoes . Your lipsync looks good to me
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Anthony Abou Rezk:
I like it! The animation seems a little rushed and some elements are lacking, but I enjoyed it and found pretty clear overall, so good job!
Animator: Bob Joostens
Description: Don't interupt my workout!
Experience: Student, +-9months of exercises
Time taken: +-15h