Zachary Lussier:

Overall it's not bad, but if you work more on your poses it will be better ;-)

eddyiv:

Nice idea! i feel like more frames would be helpful to the flow of the animation

Éloise Valiquette:

Your animation is a very good start, the only problem is that it lacks a lot of fluidity, especially on the red octopus.

Simon Côté:

great staging and great story ! that was funny :)

Anthony Abou Rezk:

This is good! I like the context, it makes funny, so good job on that. Try to work on keeping the characters volume and look consistent, it's the most recurring problem I see in these animations, anyway good job!