Comments:
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eddyiv:
Sometimes, staying still for abit or making movements of somewhat drastically different speeds can be helpfull.
Éloise Valiquette:
The movement of your child character seems to move too much in a short time at first which makes it confusing to what she is doing. Also your animation lacks a little fluidity to make the movements more alive!
Zachary Lussier:
I think you can improve your general animation, because your mouvement are too mecanical. Continue to improve one day you will get it ;-)
Simon Côté:
some movements are too slow and others are too fast ;)
Anthony Abou Rezk:
I like this one, it looks nice, try to work on your lip-sync and facial expressions, and maybe go back over a few animation principles to make it better. Anyway , good job!
Animator: Benjamin Cummings
Description: A lot of the ideas for movement in this animation sort of came to me as I was animating. It ended up making my storyboards incredibly dull looking by comparison.
Experience: Currently 2 Classes worth
Time taken: 20+ Hours