the wannabe spy
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the animation is fluid but the lipsync would be improved ;)
Watch out for the eyes of your male character, it looks like he's squinting as long as he rests his eyes in his book!
The man's movement when he says good luck with that seems kinda awkward
Great job i really like the animation overall !
This is a good start! To me, the characters feel very floaty. The man appears to be taking steps but he is not shifting his weight and his knees are popping a bunch. I'd practice some body mechanic exercises!
Anthony Abou Rezk:
That was good! The animation is pretty smooth and the poses are nice, but one thing I notice is the eyes of the guy seem weird sometimes, other than that good job!
Description: a determined kid being ignored by a spy as she narrates her dream to him.
Experience: I'm a student
Time taken: 20 days