Alejandro Parizia:

Great animation, timing and interesting acting choices. I liked pretty much everything on it, but unfortunatelly you basically skipped the second character. It would have been a more interesting shot if we could see some of the other character as well.

ibrahim:

wow this so cool, nice job..

Yigit Bayram:

Great work!

Zachary Lussier:

I like it well animate!!!

William Butler:

Great expressions

Simon Côté:

i cant tell anything about it, it is really well made !

ammon parkman:

Animation is good. I think you did the second best overall.

Éloise Valiquette:

I love your animation! You can feel the weight transfer between your poses and the fluidity of movement throughout the animation.

eddyiv:

the dangly-ness of the child is really nice! It feels very animated.

Foxy:

Hey there! Your animation quality is pretty good. I like your acting choices for the girl. I'm really not a fan of the beginning however. I like the idea of the guy like, setting her aside, but I don't think the framing works well. We also have no background for reference on what's moving and what's stationary, so it's not apparent what's going on the first time we see the beginning.

It's also very weird to have two characters having dialogue with one another and we don't see the second character. I know you're trying to make less work for yourself, but it's important in a two-character dialogue such as this. You'd never see that choice being made in a film or cinematic.

Anthony Abou Rezk:

Nice! I like this animation, it's very smooth and the girl has a lot of character, plus the lip-sync is on point! Good job to you and keep up the work!