Comments:
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Alejandro Parizia:
The general idea and staging is nice, but it needs a lot more time on polishing the animation, it's too floaty.
Emmelyn:
Move the camera less so it doesn't distract from the animation. Looks very pretty, but make sure the movements are solid before worrying about it looking good with rendering. It's also really hard to see the face at the end. I hope you continue to polish this up!
Levy Van Malder:
the camera movement does not support or add anything, its more a distraction
Simon Côté:
sometimes the movements are too slow and sometimes they are too fast
eddyiv:
The characters should move more with their limbs. Small movements. People dont stay perfectly still usually.
Éloise Valiquette:
Your animation is a good start! To improve it you can work on facial expression and speed / fluidity!
Zachary Lussier:
I think the camera move too much and your character feel if they have no emotion so improve that and your animation will be better if you increase the character mouvement and attitude. Continue to improve you will get it one day ; -)
Anthony Abou Rezk:
I like this one, it looks nice, try to work on your lip-sync and facial expressions, and maybe go back over a few animation principles to make it better. Anyway , good job!
Animator: Tiler Rogers
Description: Efi want to a spy like her acquaintance Ruby.
I'm new to animating, this is only my 2nd lip syncing animation so learning timings and phenoms was a challenge especially with two different voices.
Experience: Very Little, Three months in maya
Time taken: 27 Hours