Comments:
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Martin Miljkovic:
Story works, acting works, movements are nice, minimal but you do not need much more to tell your story. Staging could be better, try not to overlap characters. Parallax is not needed. If you wanted to put some effect you could use Hiscock's camera work.
Samantha Koffler:
LOVE the shot choices--the end with the camera in the toilet bowl is awesome!!
Animator: Evylyn
Description: Woman walks in on her cellmate making yummy toilet macaroni.
Experience: 1 year
Time taken: 1 week