Comments:
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Ben Zingo:
I'm very confused by the second character being missing in the third shot. Some of the movements are nice here? But with the quick cuts, it's hard to tell what's going on in the scene
Tom S:
A good start. There are some issue that lowered my vote based on me trying to follow the interaction between the two characters. The second character not shown in the second shot, after seeing them in the first shot sitting close to the counter. The head pointing at the floor, cannot see facial expressions.
Animator: Xiaohaiyang
Description: the mother worked hard,and then the daughter was irritable
Experience: 3 years
Time taken: 3 days