Comments:
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Michael D. Smith:
Clever approach. Timing is too fast and too stilted. Perhaps even just holding some frames on twos or threes could help a lot. It seems like there is too much motion being crammed into too short of a time at points; in the beginning with the eye and when he pulls up his legs especially.
Jingle Grigsby:
DA GUM DA GUM!!!! SO GOOd
Predrag Lazic:
Creepy
Alexis Gamber:
I really like how you did your perspectives, really fun. And some nice exaggerations and movement. Plus a really nice story telling.
Animator: Megan
Description: A dad's POV of his child startling him awake to offer him a snack.
Experience: 2 years
Time taken: 2 weeks