Ben Zingo:

reminder you aren't supposed to edit the timing of the audio, just use it as-is, and make your animation work around that

Heiner:

Seems like you added a pause after the "hi".

Jose Velasquez:

Did you edit the audio?

Maria:

There's some nice story here: we can imagine what the second character will say when she sees what's happened in the kitchen. Nice life after the scene.

Apoorv:

audio has been cut short

Coso Cartoon & Comics:

More inbetweens are needed is for a better flow in this clip. And why zoom in at first? What was the idea of it?