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Katelyn Monnier:
The whole lip-synch lacks umph and enunciation. Each mouth movement flows smoothly into the next when it needs more speed between each phoneme. I would also recommend holding some parts for longer, like the oo in food since - in it's current state - it blends with the o in oasis as if it's one word or sound.
Animator: Ellin
Description: trying new stuff
Experience: frist time
Time taken: A month