Nathan:

Cool character and background. You might have a little too much movement, I think giving more emphasis on how things settle, as well as finding creative ways to give a viusal break would be a good improvement. Great job though, the action is very fun.

Richard Adams:

Hard to rate this one. Good drawing, appealing characters. Hand movements....both good and bad. Feels like you used live action reference, which is great. The hands move very well. Problem is, the acting is terrible. Excessive gesturing. Nobody moves their hands that much, not even Italians.