Jonathan White:

Pretty competent overall. The younger dinosaur doesn't really read as a child or a girl though. They look like a smaller version of the dad.

John Alston:

You know, gritty Barney the Dinosaur isn't something I think could work, but this animator nailed that tone.

I do think the dialog seems a bit "mouth-hatch/here" but I think the syncing is solid, though some inbetweens would do wonders.

Jenna Liesman:

Stellar work! I'd love to see some more inbetweens on the baby dino's head movement like we see on the dad's. Loving the lipsync; would love to see the smoke move too!