Comments:
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Joshua:
You can't alter the audio other than that you've got the basics of the animation down, just need it to be more finished.
John Alston:
I think the the "marker design" is more effective than the mechanics, but it gets points for creativity - and the cigarette provides character motivation.
Animator: Ayca Secil Karaca
Description: father daughter talk
Experience: animation student
Time taken: 1 day