Comments:
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Joshua:
Looks like you got the blocking and the setting down pretty good, but it's hard to see and hard to tell how much of the jankiness of the video is intended vs how much of it is just simply incomplete.
John Alston:
It seems to be more special effects than actual animation, but the effects work. I think a cutaway would do wonders.
Animator: Mel
Description: Maya was my biggest enemy in this. My polished file kept crashing. I had to take my blocked file and do what I could before I was exhausted.
Experience: 4 Months - 5 Assignments
Time taken: 1 Month