Comments:
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Seth:
kinda don't understand whats going on here
John Alston:
I usually have no problem with "indicating" (using body language to exaggerate an idea) -but it loses its impact every sentence.
Joshua:
Great poses and body mechanics, but the expressions are so over the top compared to the level of emotion in the audio the two feel disconnected and unrelated. The actions and poses make this feel more comedic and goofy, maybe that was the intention, but then it makes it feel unrelated to the audio.
Zach:
Why is he on the toilet?? Hand size seems a bit large and out of proportion. But the character expressions are detailed and the environment is unique.
Alex Salas:
Very exaggerated movements from both characters, love that! Keep it up!
Clarissa Jocelyn:
The poses feel too exaggerated, lots of wiggle, not how we usually moves. The setting is interesting but doesn't add anything. Good 3d model and lighting.
Jenna Liesman:
Nice poses! There's so many bold acting choices packed into the first voice line that it feels disconnected from what the words are saying. Maybe try making the most of one or two big motions instead of four starkly contrasting ones.
Animator: Jing Yuu
Description: The dad is in the bathroom. His daughter feels that he’s having a hard time, so she brings him a handmade craft she just made at school to cheer him up.
Experience: 3 years of experience as a student
Time taken: 1 Week