Comments:
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John Alston:
Good animation, but the lack of lighting consistency make it seem worse than it is.
Jenny Seidel:
You may want to consider manually posing out the fingers for each pose; They look kind of stiff here. The father's performance might also be more readable with his face in more of a 3/4 pose, rather than profile. But otherwise, this is pretty solid work.
Animator: Davinah Seguin
Description: I worked on this as a final addition to my capstone for school. I had fun with it and I think it turned out better then my previous submission from last month. Please let me know what you think, feedback and critiques are wanted!
Experience: 3 Years
Time taken: 22 Days