Comments:
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Ezra Allen:
The motion is a bit too snappy and chirpy for the mood of the animation. It's ok to have a bit but try and change the tempo and mood with some slower subtle moves that fit the tone of the piece.
Nice work though.
Biola Animation:
Poses are fairly strong, but I think there are too many poses for dialogue this short. Heads are bobbling back and forth—is this a bit over-acted?
John Alston:
Movements don't seem cohesive.
Jenna Liesman:
Looking swell! Perhaps a few too many sharp movements between the major beats; not a bad problem to have.
Animator: rafli
Description: a father who hides his sadness in front of his child
Experience: about 1 year
Time taken: 3 days